17A- Elevator Pitch No.2

Here is my elevator pitch. Enjoy!

https://youtu.be/T8QXJH8C9Hk

What stood out to me most in my elevator pitch is delivery. I think this is the most important part of this type of pitch to get your message across.  I was surprised by all the positive feedback I got. I thought this was helpful to see what I was doing right. I fixed parts that people did not comment on or told me to correct. Overall I think it helped make my second pitch even better.