What stood out to me as important is being as short and effective as I could. I got reviews that said I should try to condense my pitch down. So on this attempt thats exactly what I did. I believe I was way more comfortable and overall had a better pitch.
Hey Dylan,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed watching this elevator pitch. I saw your other two and read the comments to give you proper feedback on this one. I love the idea and I really think you've improved big time. Your pitch this time around was condensed and effective. i believe you got to your point in a more improved manner from the previous pitch. You seemed like you knew what you were going to say and how to say it properly. Good Job.
Hey Dylan!
ReplyDeleteI think you did a really good job at keeping your pace throughout your elevator pitch. However, I would say that you should sound more excited when talking about your product and pick up the camera because the angle could be better. I liked the reference to kids. It shows me that taking care of a plant is super serious and I would not want to let my plants die, or my future kids. Thank you for sharing! I hope you do well with your company and product.